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darkness (poetry)

Journal Entry: Mon Jun 4, 2012, 9:59 AM
  • Mood: Sadness
let me paint you a picture

   darkness cages my thoughts,

    my numb soul is frostbitten,

my veins pulse with the sting of scorpions,

     my distracted eyes cry blood,

   my stiff face is branded by death,

my motionless body is ripened corpse,

      my heart is a broken mirror

  with the reflecting traces of your lies.


My   feeling   in  my  words   ..........

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:iconvictoriatart:
~VictoriaTART Jul 22, 2012  Student Artist
Wow .. that's pretty much myself too! :D
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*RAIS1 Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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~artistjames Jul 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Dark, intense, emotional........and great.
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*RAIS1 Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconmeregoddess:
What vivid imagery! Your words flow very well, and stir so much emotion. This is very well written..
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*RAIS1 Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my true feeling in my words only my fingers written this words all real emotion :)come from inside me :) thanks
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~E-Ocasio Jul 13, 2012   General Artist
Very deep and touching.
I am so glad to see other adults like myself here with substance.
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*RAIS1 Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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!Biroblue Jul 10, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
In yon cave I long did dwell
In search of heaven
By making Earth a Hell

Childe Harolds pilgrimage, Lord Byron
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Mood: Joy !purplelover57 Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it looks like a poetry
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